DEAR:YOYO
How are you, YOYO? I’m fine in Lumajang. I hope you always fine too.
In my letter, I want to tell you about my experience. Last years, I had a comfortable experience.
I went to Bali. I went to Bali by car with my father at 07.00 o’clock. In Bali. I went to Kuta beach. In Kuta beach, I saw the coconut trees. The air was very cool. After that, took pictures with my family in the beautiful scenery..
After that, I went to beach again. i fishing. I was so tired but very happy.see you
BY:THEO
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Theo, I asked you to make a letter telling about your experience, not other's. So, please try again to make it in the right form of letter,OK?
ok i understand
Ok,you has made some correction in your letter so I can give you 80 for your letter,OK? Thank you.
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